I know That the Heading of my "nazm" is quite awkward for anyone to read at a first glance as I am a female one.So I want to clarify the same to you all.As the first two lines are said by my husband last night at the time of sharing our love.So the rest of all lines are completed by me in respect of the feeling of a "male" person.So all the male members can get the meaning of the rest lines at their own concern.Hope you like my creation as under-
charne de shabaab ko, shabaab ke upar,,,
Shabaab~e~masti chaane de, sharaab ke upar.
Behne de aaj jism ki garmi ko, lahoo bankar,,,
Hasrat~e~aarmaan nikal jaane de, iss Pyaas ke upar.
Ye raat fir na aayegi, chamakte sitaaroon ko lekar,,,
Inn sitaaroon ko jal jaane de, shamaa~e~parwaan ke upar.
Har aang ijaazat de raha hai, mere paas yun simatkar,,,,
Ki bus aaj bheeg jaane de, Nayee fuhaar mein baraskar.
Apni sharm~e~hayaa ko, kanhi chor de mere sitamgar,,,,
Jab jism pighal raha hai yun, to behak mere aagosh se lipatkar.