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    Smile Charne de shabaab ko shabaab ke upar

    Hi members!
    I know That the Heading of my "nazm" is quite awkward for anyone to read at a first glance as I am a female one.So I want to clarify the same to you all.As the first two lines are said by my husband last night at the time of sharing our love.So the rest of all lines are completed by me in respect of the feeling of a "male" person.So all the male members can get the meaning of the rest lines at their own concern.Hope you like my creation as under-


    charne de shabaab ko, shabaab ke upar,,,
    Shabaab~e~masti chaane de, sharaab ke upar.

    Behne de aaj jism ki garmi ko, lahoo bankar,,,
    Hasrat~e~aarmaan nikal jaane de, iss Pyaas ke upar.

    Ye raat fir na aayegi, chamakte sitaaroon ko lekar,,,
    Inn sitaaroon ko jal jaane de, shamaa~e~parwaan ke upar.

    Har aang ijaazat de raha hai, mere paas yun simatkar,,,,
    Ki bus aaj bheeg jaane de, Nayee fuhaar mein baraskar.

    Apni sharm~e~hayaa ko, kanhi chor de mere sitamgar,,,,
    Jab jism pighal raha hai yun, to behak mere aagosh se lipatkar.
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    Quote Originally Posted by praveen gola
    Hi members!
    I know That the Heading of my "nazm" is quite awkward for anyone to read at a first glance as I am a female one.So I want to clarify the same to you all.As the first two lines are said by my husband last night at the time of sharing our love.So the rest of all lines are completed by me in respect of the feeling of a "male" person.So all the male members can get the meaning of the rest lines at their own concern.Hope you like my creation as under-


    charne de shabaab ko, shabaab ke upar,,,
    Shabaab~e~masti chaane de, sharaab ke upar.

    Behne de aaj jism ki garmi ko, lahoo bankar,,,
    Hasrat~e~aarmaan nikal jaane de, iss Pyaas ke upar.

    Ye raat fir na aayegi, chamakte sitaaroon ko lekar,,,
    Inn sitaaroon ko jal jaane de, shamaa~e~parwaan ke upar.

    Har aang ijaazat de raha hai, mere paas yun simatkar,,,,
    Ki bus aaj bheeg jaane de, Nayee fuhaar mein baraskar.

    Apni sharm~e~hayaa ko, kanhi chor de mere sitamgar,,,,
    Jab jism pighal raha hai yun, to behak mere aagosh se lipatkar.

    waaaah madamji waaaaaaaaaah.....

    kya andaaz hai......kaafi romantic aur kaafi behkaane wala kalaam hai

    hats-offf to uu for this creation.......tussi chaa gae.....

    BSFLK to uuu
    thee fikr apno ki...warna $alaam
    watan se khud ko juda kyun karta??


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    Quote Originally Posted by praveen gola
    Hi members!
    I know That the Heading of my "nazm" is quite awkward for anyone to read at a first glance as I am a female one.So I want to clarify the same to you all.As the first two lines are said by my husband last night at the time of sharing our love.So the rest of all lines are completed by me in respect of the feeling of a "male" person.So all the male members can get the meaning of the rest lines at their own concern.Hope you like my creation as under-


    charne de shabaab ko, shabaab ke upar,,,
    Shabaab~e~masti chaane de, sharaab ke upar.

    Behne de aaj jism ki garmi ko, lahoo bankar,,,
    Hasrat~e~aarmaan nikal jaane de, iss Pyaas ke upar.

    Ye raat fir na aayegi, chamakte sitaaroon ko lekar,,,
    Inn sitaaroon ko jal jaane de, shamaa~e~parwaan ke upar.

    Har aang ijaazat de raha hai, mere paas yun simatkar,,,,
    Ki bus aaj bheeg jaane de, Nayee fuhaar mein baraskar.

    Apni sharm~e~hayaa ko, kanhi chor de mere sitamgar,,,,
    Jab jism pighal raha hai yun, to behak mere aagosh se lipatkar.


    "But you may hate a thing although it is good for you, and may love a thing although it is evil for you. Allah knows, and you do not."(Baqarah:216)

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    Wo ajnabi si 'larki ab zindagi he meri'...



    na jane q aisa lagta he mujhko kabhi kabhi
    k wo anjaani si larki
    mujhe chahti he
    mujhe paana chahti he

    jab bhi me use dekhta hu
    wo sharma jaati he
    jab me muh ferta hu usse
    to wo duniyawalo se bachke mujhe dekhti he

    Mujhey aisa ehsas dilati hai jesay
    Woh mujh sey kuch kehna chahti hai
    lekin mere puchne pe
    najane q wo kuch kah nahi paati he

    Aisa mehsus hota he jese dosto
    wo shayad "Shahid" se pyar karti he
    Magar wo nahi jaanti he yeh
    k wo ajnabi si 'larki ab zindagi he meri'...

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    ღ~●♥ Dilon Se Jorrti Thi Jo Dilon Ko,

    Woh Sab Rasmain Badalti Ja Rahi Hain.♥●~ღ


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    Salam ji eik sawaal hum apni .in pe share karda shayari
    mein se koi yahaan peish kar sakte hain naa??

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    Quote Originally Posted by saifali
    Salam ji eik sawaal hum apni .in pe share karda shayari
    mein se koi yahaan peish kar sakte hain naa??

    jee haan....
    agr aapki wo poetry contest ke mutaabik hai to zaroor kijiye...
    romntic honi chaiye
    aapki apni honi chaiye

    thee fikr apno ki...warna $alaam
    watan se khud ko juda kyun karta??


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    Quote Originally Posted by salam_69

    jee haan....
    agr aapki wo poetry contest ke mutaabik hai to zaroor kijiye...
    romntic honi chaiye
    aapki apni honi chaiye

    Ji ji insha'ALLAH aisa hi hoga not to worry

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    bohot achi koshish janab
    aise hi likhte rahen apke kalaam me nikhaar aata rahega



    Quote Originally Posted by shahidrocks


    na jane q aisa lagta he mujhko kabhi kabhi
    k wo anjaani si larki
    mujhe chahti he
    mujhe paana chahti he

    jab bhi me use dekhta hu
    wo sharma jaati he
    jab me muh ferta hu usse
    to wo duniyawalo se bachke mujhe dekhti he

    Mujhey aisa ehsas dilati hai jesay
    Woh mujh sey kuch kehna chahti hai
    lekin mere puchne pe
    najane q wo kuch kah nahi paati he

    Aisa mehsus hota he jese dosto
    wo shayad "Shahid" se pyar karti he
    Magar wo nahi jaanti he yeh
    k wo ajnabi si 'larki ab zindagi he meri'...



    "But you may hate a thing although it is good for you, and may love a thing although it is evil for you. Allah knows, and you do not."(Baqarah:216)

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    Quote Originally Posted by shahidrocks


    na jane q aisa lagta he mujhko kabhi kabhi
    k wo anjaani si larki
    mujhe chahti he
    mujhe paana chahti he

    jab bhi me use dekhta hu
    wo sharma jaati he
    jab me muh ferta hu usse
    to wo duniyawalo se bachke mujhe dekhti he

    Mujhey aisa ehsas dilati hai jesay
    Woh mujh sey kuch kehna chahti hai
    lekin mere puchne pe
    najane q wo kuch kah nahi paati he

    Aisa mehsus hota he jese dosto
    wo shayad "Shahid" se pyar karti he
    Magar wo nahi jaanti he yeh
    k wo ajnabi si 'larki ab zindagi he meri'...

    Masha'ALLAH Shahid bhai lajawaab likhe hain
    insha'ALLAH mazeed bhi likhte rahein

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    Shukriya nasirbhai and saif bahi aap ki hausalaafzaayi k liye..tahe dil se sukriya bolta hu..

    ღ~●♥ Dilon Se Jorrti Thi Jo Dilon Ko,

    Woh Sab Rasmain Badalti Ja Rahi Hain.♥●~ღ



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