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Charne de shabaab ko shabaab ke upar
Hi members!
I know That the Heading of my "nazm" is quite awkward for anyone to read at a first glance as I am a female one.So I want to clarify the same to you all.As the first two lines are said by my husband last night at the time of sharing our love.So the rest of all lines are completed by me in respect of the feeling of a "male" person.So all the male members can get the meaning of the rest lines at their own concern.Hope you like my creation as under- charne de shabaab ko, shabaab ke upar,,, Shabaab~e~masti chaane de, sharaab ke upar. Behne de aaj jism ki garmi ko, lahoo bankar,,, Hasrat~e~aarmaan nikal jaane de, iss Pyaas ke upar. Ye raat fir na aayegi, chamakte sitaaroon ko lekar,,, Inn sitaaroon ko jal jaane de, shamaa~e~parwaan ke upar. Har aang ijaazat de raha hai, mere paas yun simatkar,,,, Ki bus aaj bheeg jaane de, Nayee fuhaar mein baraskar. Apni sharm~e~hayaa ko, kanhi chor de mere sitamgar,,,, Jab jism pighal raha hai yun, to behak mere aagosh se lipatkar.
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 Mrs. Praveen Gola© Last edited by praveen gola : 06-02-2012 at 08:50 PM. 
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06-03-2012, 03:24 AM
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waaaah madamji waaaaaaaaaah..... kya andaaz hai......kaafi romantic aur kaafi behkaane wala kalaam hai hats-offf to uu for this creation.......tussi chaa gae.....  BSFLK to uuu
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aesa nahi k Salaaam......zindagi ki haajat nahi rahi
bs toot tootkar bikharne ki ab taaqat nahi rahi
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06-03-2012, 05:34 AM
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hairankun peshkash apki taraf se
bohot khoob Quote:
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"But you may hate a thing although it is good for you, and may love a thing although it is evil for you. Allah knows, and you do not."(Baqarah:216)
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06-04-2012, 11:54 AM
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Wo ajnabi si 'larki ab zindagi he meri'...
na jane q aisa lagta he mujhko kabhi kabhi k wo anjaani si larki mujhe chahti he mujhe paana chahti he jab bhi me use dekhta hu wo sharma jaati he jab me muh ferta hu usse to wo duniyawalo se bachke mujhe dekhti he Mujhey aisa ehsas dilati hai jesay Woh mujh sey kuch kehna chahti hai lekin mere puchne pe najane q wo kuch kah nahi paati he Aisa mehsus hota he jese dosto wo shayad "Shahid" se pyar karti he Magar wo nahi jaanti he yeh k wo ajnabi si 'larki ab zindagi he meri'...
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ღ~•●♥ Mere alfazo ko dard e dil nahi, alfaz he samjo to acha ha♥
♥Kahinn tumhe iss shayar se pyar na ho jaye.♥●•~ღ 
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06-05-2012, 01:53 AM
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jee haan.... agr aapki wo poetry contest ke mutaabik hai to zaroor kijiye... romntic honi chaiye aapki apni honi chaiye
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aesa nahi k Salaaam......zindagi ki haajat nahi rahi
bs toot tootkar bikharne ki ab taaqat nahi rahi
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06-05-2012, 04:49 PM
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Ji ji insha'ALLAH aisa hi hoga not to worry 
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06-06-2012, 05:42 AM
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bohot achi koshish janab
aise hi likhte rahen apke kalaam me nikhaar aata rahega Quote:
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"But you may hate a thing although it is good for you, and may love a thing although it is evil for you. Allah knows, and you do not."(Baqarah:216)
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06-06-2012, 06:50 AM
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insha'ALLAH mazeed bhi likhte rahein
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06-06-2012, 10:06 AM
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Shukriya nasirbhai and saif bahi aap ki hausalaafzaayi k liye..tahe dil se sukriya bolta hu.. 
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ღ~•●♥ Mere alfazo ko dard e dil nahi, alfaz he samjo to acha ha♥
♥Kahinn tumhe iss shayar se pyar na ho jaye.♥●•~ღ
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